Showing posts with label colorcoded. Show all posts
Showing posts with label colorcoded. Show all posts

Friday, July 3, 2009

Auceps et Dipsas (color-coded)

AUCEPS ET DIPSAS. More information about this poem and about the color-coding.

Dum turdos visco, · pedica dum fallit alaudas,

Et iact(a) altivolam || figit arundo gruem,

Dipsada non prudens
· auceps pede perculit: ultrix

Illa mal(i), emissum
|| virus ab ore iacit.

Sic obit, extento
· qui sidera respicit arcu,

Securus fati,
|| quod iacet ante pedes.

Notes: None.




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Monday, June 29, 2009

Milvus Viscera Comedens (color-coded)

MILVUS VISCERA COMEDENS. More information about this poem and about the color-coding.


Milvus edax, nimiae · quem nausea torserat escae,

Hei mihi, mater, ait, || viscer(a) ab ore fluunt.

Ill(a) autem, Quid fles?
· Cur haec tua viscera credas,

Qui rapto vivens
|| sol(a) aliena vomis?



Notes: None.




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Musca et Currus (color-coded)

PUER ET FUR. More information about this poem and about the color-coding.


In rapidi radio · currus fors Musca sedebat;

Progrediente rota || plurima pulvis erat.

Continuo clamat
· iactanter Musca pusilla,

"En! equidem quantum || pulveris ipse cio."



Notes: None.




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Puer et Fur (color-coded)

PUER ET FUR. More information about this poem and about the color-coding.

Fontibus est puteum · vivis; ibi forte sedebat

Flens Puer; ac Furi, || cur fleat ipse, refert:

"Flere mihi fas est;
· nam, ruptis funibus, eheu!

Aurea sub laevas || urna subivit aquas."

Dixerat: extemplo
·
direptis vestibus aurum

Fur avidus sibi vult, || in puteumque micat.

Vas ubi non reperit, mox se fert rursus in auras;

Haud Puer, haud vestis, || quam tueatur, adest.



Notes: None.


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Corvus et Scorpion (color-coded)

CORVUS ET SCORPION. More information about this poem and about the color-coding.


Raptabat volucres · captum pede corvus in auras

Scorpion, audaci || praemia parta gulae.

Ast ill(e) infuso
· sensim per membra veneno,

Raptor(em) in Stygias || compulit ultor aquas.


O risu res dign(a)
aliis qui fata parabat,

Ipse perit, propriis || succubuitque dolis.



Notes: In the fifth line, the better caesura would be in the fourth foot, but for the purposes of the color coding here, I have marked it in the third foot.



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Haedus et Lupus (color-coded)

HAEDUS ET LUPUS. More information about this poem and about the color-coding.


Est monitis semper · reverentia danda parentis:

Consilium, iuvenes, || mente tenete senum.

Iamqu(e) erat orta dies,
· Haedum cum clausit in aula

Capra; frui nemoris || frondibus ipsa parat.

Discessu sobolem
· monuit tamen anxia mater,

"Pande fores nulli, || donec eg(o) ipsa voco."

Haec Lupus audierat;
· mox pulsat et imperat Haedo,

Voce Capram simulans; || "Heus, bone, solve seras."

"Ianua clausa," refert
· per rimas ille, "manebit:

Voce vocor Caprae || prospicioque Lupum."



Notes: None.



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Anguillas captans (color-coded)

ANGUILLAS CAPTANS.

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Anguillas quisquis · captat, si limpida verrat

Flumina, s(i) illimes || ausit adire lacus,

Cassus erit, ludet
·qu(e) operam: mult(um) excitet ergo

Si cret(ae), et vitreas
|| palmula turbet aquas,

Dives erit: sic iis
· res publica turbida lucr(o) est,

Qui pac(e), arctati
|| legibus, esuriunt.


Notes: It is also possible to consider the third line to have a fourth-foot caesura; for the purposes of this color-coding system, I have chosen to mark it in the third foot.



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Leo et Capella (color-coded)

LEO ET CAPELLA.

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Forte Leo vidit · restant(em) in rupe Capellam:

Scilicet huc illuc || ardua rupis erat.

"Editiore loco
· descendas," callidus ille

Incipit; "in campo || dulcior herba viret."

"At locus est," ait haec,
· "gratus; mihi pabula rupis

Laeta minus praebet, || tuta sed ista placent."



Notes: Given the choice, I tend to read ait as two syllables in dactylic verse. What do others do?



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Color-Coding Meter

One of the biggest problems that students face with meter is that they get lost in the details of the feet, without seeing the overall shape of the line. By color-coding the distinct parts of the hexameter and pentamenter lines, perhaps I can make those parts appear more clearly to the students.

Here are the principles I will be following

1) I'll be working with "typical" verse lines only, which is to say that the hexameter line will have its caesura in the third foot, and that it will have a dactyl for the fifth foot. In particular, the marking is much more clear when there is a diaeresis at the juncture of the fourth and fifth foot. It's good for students to become familiar with this standard kind of couplet; they can learn about less commonly found metrical patterns later on.

2) RED for double dactyl. For the first three feet of the hexameter line, I will use red to mark a double dactyl, including the first element of the third foot. Likewise, I will use red to mark a double dactyl in a pentameter hemistich. For the third and fourth foot of the hexameter line, I will also use red to mark a double dactyl (although the first element of the third foot will not be marked, coming as it does before the caesura).

3) BLUE for dactyl-spondee. For the first three feet of the hexameter line, I will use blue to mark a dactyl-spondee, including the first element of the third foot. Likewise, I will use blue to mark a dactyl-spondee in a pentameter hemistich. For the third and fourth foot of the hexameter line, I will also use blue to mark a dactyl-spondee (although the first element of the third foot will not be marked, coming as it does before the caesura).

4) GREEN for spondee-dactyl. For the first three feet of the hexameter line, I will use green to mark a spondee-dactyl, including the first element of the third foot. Likewise, I will use green to mark a spondee-dactyl in a pentameter hemistich. For the third and fourth foot of the hexameter line, I will also use green to mark a spondee-dactyl (although the first element of the third foot will not be marked, coming as it does before the caesura).

5) BROWN for spondee-spondee. For the first three feet of the hexameter line, I will use purple to mark a spondee-spondee, including the first element of the third foot. Likewise, I will use purple to mark a spondee-spondee in a pentameter hemistich. For the third and fourth foot of the hexameter line, I will also use purple to mark a spondee-spondee (although the first element of the third foot will not be marked, coming as it does before the caesura).

For more samples, look at the posts labeled as "colorcoded" for meter: Color-Coding Meter.

Sample poem: RUSTICUS ET HERCULES (more information)

Altius in caeno · plaustrum fort(e) haesit Agrestis;

Difficilis longo
|| facta vi(a) imbre fuit.

Segnis at Alciden
· precibus petit: "O! Deus," inquit,

"Dexter ades nobis || auxiliumque refer."

"Quid tibi nobiscum?" Sic torvus reddidit ille,

"Ex aliis quid opes || auxiliumque rogas?

Incut(e) equis flagrum;
· propria vi nititor ipse;

Si non profuerit
, || fas et adire Deos."